Critique My First Mix!!!

[BobbyBalow]

This is my first recording in general and it's with a metal band. I think if the drummer's snare wasn't broken, it would have sounded a hell of a lot better. Let me know what needs fixing! Please be critical! I'm new at this and would like to know how to really get a good sound. Thanks everyone!

http://www.purevolume.com/recordingcritique

p.s. I charged $5 / hr. Based on the recording, do you guys think its worth more or less? THANKS AGAIN!

[random effect]

I think that the quality of the recording is pretty damn good. It has good punch. maybe a little less 60-80 hz freqs in the drums (just a little less) and it will remove a lot of the muddy sound. The band reminds me of the used a bit. Not really my styke but they pull it off. Now since i critiqued yours, here's mine

www.myspace.com/randomeffect

in need of opinions

[BobbyBalow]

The toms sound really dead. And i think the cymbols are a little loud in the mix. Not bad though. I like a little more crack in my snare than what you have. Other than that, I dont think its all that bad...