Reason 3.0 Beat/Song (can you write a hook for this?)

[djdownload]

Here is a beat/song I did in Reason 3.0. It's got a lot of strings that sound pretty good. I was wondering if anyone can write something for this. Hook verse etc. It's already laid out with hook, verse, bridge sections etc. If not, please comment on the music. I'd like to hear what others think of it. Thanks

Comments Welcome.

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[onlydude]

... why are you asking people to write a song for you?

[misscc803]

Originally Posted by onlydude

... why are you asking people to write a song for you?

I think he wants to know if anybody could write to the song based on how its put together.

[djdownload]

Exactly. I want to know (from a writers point or rappers point) if this layout/beat is something that could work. I'm just trying to get some feedback on my style. Thanks

[P. Dexter]

Really nice tone man. I aint a rapper, but I could write somthing to it. Matter of fact it makes me want to flow on it.

You got some nice tracks.


"Keep It old school"

[Fieva]

Track is damn good. Only thing I would do is separate the intro from the hook to distinguish it more...that's all I can say about it. That's an easy one to write a track to, but you couldn't have anuy half ass done lyrics on it. It'd just be wrong.

I could easily see something like an Xzibit/Snoop/Eastsidaz collab on this one.

[djdownload]

Thank you for the great feedback. That's what I'm looking for. I will re-arrange it bit more and see what I can do.

[dawg2k5]

Some Killah Beatz baby..
Down wit da homies on dis one.