Springsteen/Pop, comments?

[Chip_Saffire]

This is one of four songs from World's Smallest Quartet's Demo. The song is not filled 'till perfection (I know, the cowbell is a bit loud!), because this is just a rough mix to share some thoughts with our soundengineer, who is going to mix/master the whole demo.

Please give me some feedback so we can raise this song to the "next" level!

http://www.lightningmp3.com/live/file.php?fid=3107

Thanks! /Olov

[Chip_Saffire]

Someone, please?

[greenie]

wish i could understand the vocal - its like imitating springsteen or whoever is going a few steps so far that the dictions mudded.
overall you got good flow, just watch those levels and dont drown the vocal -unless he keeps slurring everything.
this could be very good!

[Chip_Saffire]

The lyrics are a bit blurry, agree..! But as said before, this is just a rough mix to our soundengineer...=)

Anyway, thanks for the comment!

[whjr15]

im not gonna comment on the mix, since you said it was rough...

...but i love the direction you guys are going with this!! keep it up!