Gimme ya opinions on this 1"I'm Here"

[Killah_Trakz]

This is off a song i've done called i'm here this just without the main sample playing peace.

http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=729064&t=1866 <<< The Link

[Fyre]

okay..... i like the old school vibe of the beat for real Fam......

Ya style and delivery is crazy......... nice shit.........

lyrics aint that great...... but they aint horrible either........

iown like the hook I think that could have been done better.....

overall I like this joint.......... especially the beat

[Killah_Trakz]

The scratches really needs work, but thanks for ya input.

[20/20]

the intro kind of didint go with the flow of the beat. it led you to belive the bet was going to be in a different style. The beat you did go with did fit the vocals but the scratching needed work.. If you dont have the scratching skill yet what you can do is slow the song and lay your scratches then when you speed it back up they will be more precise. just a get by trick but dont rest on it. all in all good job

[Killah_Trakz]

But i didnt do the scratching.

[Murdock Jones]

That ain't the strongest joint I heard from you Killa, and I know you got some heaters my dog, cuz I heard 'em....Stay rhymin' ova hot tracks....I see where you were going with that cut chorus, but it didn't really turn out that hot. I know you weren't responsible for the cuts, but you gotta take responsibility for anything that you spittin' on. Keep them hot joints coming home boi. Check out Brooklyn on my site. Maybe I can help you out with them cutz

[Killah_Trakz]

Yeah when its time for the full mixdown everything is gonna on point. Just trying to finish this album.

[Murdock Jones]

Can't rush perfection