My short freestyle... opinions needed 'n schtuff

[peritus]

No intro needed (it's basically a test of soundclick)...

it's here!

PARENTAL ADVISORY!!!!!

[peritus]

Somebody tell me what they think of the beat (no so much the vocals..cause they suck)... I'm anxious to know what ya think people...

[Change of POETS]

Honestly, it's bad. It's not very good at all. From what I can tell, the mix is pretty bad, and the beat is quite bland.

What type of sound were you going for? Is this your first attempt at Hip-Hop?

[Murdock Jones]

You gotta boost up them drums MC Bill Clinton. "Make them snares sound like gun shots". I do like the music though. Get a good mix, and boost up them damn drums...Hold up I said that twice.

[Diffusion]

THAT was a freestlye? haha... yeah, it was bad.

[Spit_Facts]

Peritus u wack dog.... Stick to postin messages

[UNIQNESS]

worst shit i've ever heard.

[Diffusion]

man im still trying to figure out if this guy is serious or not...

[peritus]

I expected bad replies, but damn... lol

[Murdock Jones]

Yo P, keep doin you, forget what everybody says. Somebody out there what's to hear that shit that you do.

[NickSpringfield]

I agree with Murdock that I like the actual music, but the mix needs work. The lyrics? I won't even take them into consideration, because they're not even worth the thought... you know this I'm sure as you said it was a test for Soundclick.

Just work on your mixing and if your gonna attach your voice to something, make sure you believe in it. I'm anxious to hear more from you... you can only get better. You gotta do ths one step at a time.

-Springfield

[peritus]

Cool.. Thanks for the support (Don't worry I haven't conned myself into thinking I'm Nas with the rapping or Dre with the beat.. I'm just playing around ya know)...

So, here's something else (whether you wanna listen or not)... Don't worry, no vocals this time ...

Vincent Price (Interlude)

[peritus]

And here's something more from the heart...

A Depressed Record Spinning

[peritus]

The Chase ... This is a really old creation of mine... No mastering again... It's supposed to be for a chase scene in a movie....

[peritus]

Parlay

Someone told me this was a Trip-Hop beat... But who knows?

[peritus]

Raining

..it's not great... but I think it has emotion...

[peritus]

Originally Posted by Murdock Jones

You gotta boost up them drums MC Bill Clinton. "Make them snares sound like gun shots". I do like the music though. Get a good mix, and boost up them damn drums...Hold up I said that twice.

By the way.. I'd rather be MC Bill Clinton ANY DAY than MC George Bush...

[Murdock Jones]

Hey man, you got some bangers on your resume. I was really feelin Mzia, and Thanks a lot. I see you got access to some crazy sounds. What are you using? You definitely got your own style, and that's refreshing. You can honestly say that you don't sound like anybody out there. Keep on makin it do what it do.

[gullyjewelz]

yo vincent price is hot!!! dark n grimey but hot!!!

yo drops on the freestyle are not great . . . but if u put your mind to it . . . u could use the "i said that twice" as a hook or refrain . . . and come up with some type of interesting, comical type verses . . . it would work - if u put the time into it . . .

yo -- raining is hot - once the beat drops . . . it takes too long for the beat to drop - thank god i got patience . . . TODAY . . . but once the beat drops its an ill song . . . really lends it self to a concept joint . . . hey . . whats your plans for this? i could really do someting wit it . . . .

[peritus]

Originally Posted by Murdock Jones

Hey man, you got some bangers on your resume. I was really feelin Mzia, and Thanks a lot. I see you got access to some crazy sounds. What are you using? You definitely got your own style, and that's refreshing. You can honestly say that you don't sound like anybody out there. Keep on makin it do what it do.

Thanks!

I'd say alot of the reasons I'm bad on the mic are probably reasons why you think I have an original style. See, I've been trying to put something together since I was 16. Problem has always been that I'm stuck here in suburbia with a bunch of motherfuckers who think rap is a novelty (And that making beats is cake. Even though they never try to verify that fact). Which brings me to my point. It's hard to be a good freestyler, rapper, and beatmaker when you have nobody behind you and no one to practice with or coach ya (you may be able to relate). Plus being white has always stayed my hand when practicing (aka it's hard to be confident enough to even open my mouth at all because of my voice).

Now for the sounds. I've been usuing Propellerhead's Reason since I was 18, so a lot of that older stuff is from that. When I say the beat is old, I mean like 2 years old (because I basically gave up on this for a long while). Well, I'm back, and I'm using ProTools, some good mics (Rode), actual monitor speakers (Roland), and a room dedicated for this purpose. This is my dream. Maybe not rapping but the beats I hear in my head.

I know I'm rambling but no one ever inquired on my style before today...

[peritus]

Originally Posted by gullyjewelz

yo vincent price is hot!!! dark n grimey but hot!!!

yo drops on the freestyle are not great . . . but if u put your mind to it . . . u could use the "i said that twice" as a hook or refrain . . . and come up with some type of interesting, comical type verses . . . it would work - if u put the time into it . . .

yo -- raining is hot - once the beat drops . . . it takes too long for the beat to drop - thank god i got patience . . . TODAY . . . but once the beat drops its an ill song . . . really lends it self to a concept joint . . . hey . . whats your plans for this? i could really do someting wit it . . . .

Thanks to you too!

As far as Vincent Price is concerned. It one of those strange animals that I wanted to make into a full song but never could figure out how to piece it together.

Raining was made like 3 years ago. You're right that into is WAAAY too long. I have always intended to go back and trim it. Never had a reason to before today (so I'll work on it ASAP and let ya know so you can check it again). Like I said, it's been sitting on the shelf for so long. If you can do something with it, it would be worth it just to see it used. I only ask to be credited (if it drops on an album). Someday I'll probably make money on this but I haven't put enough time into the business end of my game yet.

[NickSpringfield]

You've already gotten beter in my eyes just by posting some other stuff. I'm likin' Raining anda few others I can't remember off the top right now. Again, I agree with Murdock... you don't sound like anything out there now, so use that to your advantage.

-Springfield

[bknot1]

also you can make a message board on soundclick so you can get others to post and network with you..just a thought

[peritus]

Originally Posted by NickSpringfield

You've already gotten beter in my eyes just by posting some other stuff. I'm likin' Raining anda few others I can't remember off the top right now. Again, I agree with Murdock... you don't sound like anything out there now, so use that to your advantage.

-Springfield

Cool, thanks!

[peritus]

Originally Posted by bknot1

also you can make a message board on soundclick so you can get others to post and network with you..just a thought

It asked me if I wanted to do that.. I'll look into it later today.. Thanks for the suggestion!