Critique this new song :)

[wx3]

Hey guys,

We just finished recording and mixing this song. It's called Jay Den - Opposites Attract and you can find it here: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=380545

The beat was brought to me in a 128kbps mp3 :S.... and im pretty sure the bass was clipping orignally so I did what rescue work I could on it.

But I think the rest is just great! Let's see what you guys think.

[ido1957]

Big bottom on this - love to hear this on a sub-woofer, would make my chest thump I'm sure. Good beatz. I think you rescued this pretty well - I heard no clipping. Nice clear vocals - double vocals good especially when they get to the low pitch - that's tough to do well. I would post a Parental Advisory re the (few) cuss words - just so we know to keep the little ones out when listening. The lyrics are very well written - good "story" behind them. Good tune - I liked it!

[wx3]

Yeah, sorry about those few words. Thanks for all the good comments.