Take a Listen to my song give me feedback please

[Auntnastyoven]

Alright so ive given up on finidng muscians to play with around me so ive gone solo and in doing so ive been tyring to do the best i can with what i have. So basically here is a song i just finished and heres what i used. I also have a friend who will do vocals once i can get this sounding the best i can.

Drums - Fruity Loops
Bass - Fruity Loops
Guitar - Ibanez , Peavey JSX, Genz Benz 4x12
Sonar 4 to put it all together
1 Shure sm57

http://home.comcast.net/~sumguitarguy /Unknown_Artist_-_01_-_songtest.mp3

Ive been trying to do the best i can with what little equipment i have so if anyone could give me some pointers as to how things sound generally it would be very helpful. IE the guitars bass drums, how well they are mixed together, but also keep in mind im a beginniner at this whole recording thing.