critique my track plz,,

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Yo, will yall plz let me know what u think bout this track i just did it doesnt have 2nd verse adlibs on it yet ,, but besides that let me knwo what i needa do to it to make it betta ,,, http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=683987&t=1117

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At first i was like this home boy is a straight south biter, but lyrically i'll give it to you. Those ad libs on the chorus should be doubled up (the ones you have panned hard left and right) just for some added feel. The song is tight, beat wise those snares need more to them in a bad way! fix those and you may have a hood banger on ya hands!

Advise- I swear if you make those snares snap/hit hard enough you'll have an ill ass song no lie! or at least an ill ass beat

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bump , yah ima talk to tha dud that made the beat and see what up with that , on the adlibs wich ones did u mean ? and anymore tipds peoplepes ?