What do you think?

[the pete]

i think theres something missing in this, i dont know thouhg, what do you think of it?

Sleep Walker

[DavidK]

Its a link to nothing.

[LfO]

Originally Posted by DavidK

Its a link to nothing.

I can hear it. IMHO, the snare sticks out too much, and there's no kick (perhaps need more high end there for those of us with crap speakers?) Sound like the drummers taken "driving" into "rushing" a bit.

EDIT: Hmm - low mids seem generally lacking - bring them up in the bass git?

[SonicAlbert]

I agree about the snare sticking out too much. The mix also seems rather bass shy.

[DavidK]

Ok, gotta rightclick and save for me to hear it.

Sounds OK, the drummer needs to relax. The upbeat snare is way too early.

The song is catchy, I would fix the ending and just fade out the last chord without the bass at the very end.

Oh............... put this in the mp3clinic

[the pete]

okat sweet, thanks guys