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Hey if you wouldn't mind would you let me know what you think of the verse called "Legit Rydaz Clip"? Feedback is greatly appreciated and leave a link so I can peep your music too. Thanks!
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Doesnt Sound "hype" . . . "live" . . . Like U Should Be More Aggressive Wit It -- Now It Just Sounds Like U Were Just Doin A Dress Rehearsal . . . But At The Same Time, Im Not Sure What The Point Of The Verse Is . . .
Its Ok -- But Seems Like U Can Dig Deeper (i Hate To Sayin "non Supportive" Type Shit, Cuz I Know I Git A Tude When I Hear About My Verses . . . But I Mean If U Sposed To Be Ridin -- U Sposed To Be Gittin Kinda Wicked Wit It |
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Cool thanks for the tips. I really wasn't sure where I was gunna go with it, so I just did what came to me. The track was actually my homies idea he's on the full version. I really don't know what he was trying to get across with this track, but you know we're just knockin tracks out like jones jr. over here. Anyway thanks again...
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cool -- well hey -- if u down for a collabo -- i would love to jump on it or some other fly shit!!!! |
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Cool man, I'm always down to work with new people. If you want to holla at me and try to set something up my contact info is at The Sexy Devil Entertainment site
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Like the verse I agree it needs to be re-recorded but you have skill and post the finished version after ur done!
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I'll be sure to post up the finished version when the track is done. My homie emailed me today saying he wanted to change the name, kind of fucks up my verse, so I don't know about it. Peace...
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