Need Advice

[BALKI]

HEART'Z OF MEN UP OUT THA PEN!!!

SOUNDCLICK

Feedbk will alway'z be appreciated.

Dallas,Texas

[BALKI]

Man NO feedbk? This track is starting to wear on me. I didn't like it at frist, but now I might just keep it.

[Fieva]

I will listen and give you feed later tonight.

[gullyjewelz]

what i read on your site/player:
"This is a cross between underground and mainstream hip hop. The beat is completely original--unlike anything you've ever heard before."

this track is fire -- pure, strait no chaser. let no one tell u different!!!!
but this is not "UNLIKE ANYTHING I'VE EVER HEARD" -- ITS quite within a genre that many do -- not that its a bad thing. quite the contrary it has a perfect spot to fit into!!!

now the verse -- im hopin u was just gassin it up -- that is certainly not a "final take" -- it sounded more like just talkin . . . so i know ur gonna re spit that rite?

[BALKI]

To be honest I didn't like the lyrics much our the way I spitted it. I was just lookin for feed on the chorus. Imma redo the whole track and try to Do the chorus better thnx man 4 the feed well appreciate I gotcha On feed man.