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Poppy Kind of song "Answer your Phone"
Check it out and let me know what you think. I think the vocals might be a bit loud, and they are a bit flat as well, but its better than no vocals. Made this in about 3 hours, so hit me with your best shot. Lyrics are a direct rip-off of some song by SugarRay I have never heard. I seriously googled some lyrics just to put them in there, and I am writing the lyrics as we speak (or you listen).
Sean http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=331646
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Sounds fine to me. What's the little synth sounding beeping riff?
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Thats all i get? 1 response?
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Its kindof funny listening to this song because i used to be a big sugar ray fan.
It all sounds good except for the reverb on the vox is very distracting for some reason. |
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sssssss......syphillis, oops sorry, I meant, sibilance, sibilance on the vocals, man. Pull down the ultra high frequencies on the vocs. Nice tune, btw.
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What Seeker and Donger said.
Nice backing tracks tho....and you're not that flat - I'm pretty flat on my best day Vox are a bit high maybe and could use some compression.....Wild effect on the end (Whammy + Wah?) Cool... ![]() |
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I think it sounds good the mix is about right the vocals are ok and it is a lil hard to be non biased being that the lyrics don't go with that song. But the music is cool I like it. I think the style of singing doesn't fit.
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