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[n4eem]

hey please review this song and tell me wat u fink of it! , ignore the lyrics(indian traditional) just rate it on the layout and see if it sounds complete, thanx to who comments! http://www.soundclick.com/desicutz

[RAMI]

I love it...Always loved Easter traditional music, whether it's Indian or Egyptian, etc...This is very cool and a modern sound to a traditional style...very nice.

[bigbubba]

Listening now.

Meh Kavi Kahi(feat.Zulfi)
Too much echo/reverb on the lyrics in the beginning. Maybe reduce the repeat rate or something. Around 0:24 when he says Kare Pyar after "Jhuki Jhuki", the echo sort of makes the words step on their own toes if you know what I mean.

Nice Piano sound.
Nice Strings.

I like how he fades out into the distance in places. Interesting how reverb varies.

Do I hear tabla samples in there?

The vocals might be a panned a little harder to one side. On this system I can sort of tell that they're panned but not to which side.

Dude, Bally Sagoo is cool.

[Llarion]

The vox have an interesting dimensional choice; but are just a tad thin for my taste, it's just over the edge of "gimmicky"...Especially because the music bed is full and full of interest... Overall, a neat piece. World music is fascinating...

[Seeker of Rock]

What a cool opportunity for a culturally unique style of music!

I dig the style completely, but have to be unbiased on what I hear you should do in the production, as I believe that is what you are looking for.

The reverb on the vocals in two (that's the number I counted anyway) places, the parts where the music lets off and the vocals resonate downward....reverb is too dark. Not sure what unit or plugin you are using, but the tails are to deep. Somebody more qualified could give better advice, I am just pointing it out.
There is a point somewhere near the middle/end of the song where there are vocals beneath the keys (synth), and the synth is a little too loud. Just a bit too prominent.
Nice chimes to set the mood, nice vocal scales and delivery. Reminiscing, reminds me vaguely of one of my favorite songs, Miserlou by Dick Dale. He has Mid-Eastern heritage which, according to the media, was the inspiration for the song which ended up being an American "surf classic", perhaps the pinnacle of surf songs ever written.
A "club" style of production/writing, but very well done excepting the two minor issues in need of addressing.

[ido1957]

Well done - I like the many layers of instruments and the different vocals here. Nice synths and drums......
Cool!

[n4eem]

WOWW, wat a response!! thankyou soo much, ill keep doin my best to improve this track!! thnx thnx thnx, keep em comin!!!

[n4eem]

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[packratlouie]

Lots of interesting reverb.

I like the rhythmic things going on here. Tabla samples, sounding good.

You need to bring the vocals more into the center of the mix, as they're panned so hard to either side, they sound infinitely wide, and extend about 10 feet to either side of my speakers (exaggeration). Not to mention they're sitting lopsided on the left in your current mix.

The song is pretty interesting though, enjoyed it.

[n4eem]

hey all these songs you hear are produced, composed and remixed using fl studio and magix music maker!! feel free listenin to em, n if you, so tell me wat ya fink!!

[n4eem]

hey!!! more mixes updated!! can i have more feedback pleaseee, cus im wantin to take these songs out to public! thnxx