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Trying to write a decent song (lyrically)...
OK. This is what I have so far. Please tell me if it is any good or what I should change. Should I just scrap it all together?
Walking for a million years Searching for you face Never seen the likes of you When you put me in my place Crawling through the years Pawning off my hate I think that I can reach you now But I'm a million years too late Must have been a lie Must have been a lie If only you could try to be Try to be somebody else You kick me when I'm down Just when I've made it through I cannot understand Why I can't get close to you The feelings that I feel Would kill you, this I'm sure Maybe that's what's wrong I'm just too dirty and you're too pure Must have been a lie Must have been a lie If only you could try to be Try to be somebody else And they come to be just like you And they come to be just like you And they come to be just like you And I'll come to leave you living like you do Must have been a lie Must have been a lie If only you could try to be Try to be somebody else Thanks in advance.
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I've come to realize that a lot of the music I create is inspired by video game music. Is that wrong? |
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