yes no maybe

[rankmanugly]

hello.
just after some honest opinions of this song. i havent really shown anyone it, so im interested in what people think aswell as suggestions about its recording and what could be done to improve the song. honesty is appreciated, like it ,hate it, whatever.
if you have the time and patience to listen to it all,
cheers

[rankmanugly]

sorry, heres the link, its down the bottom of the page.....

http://spongepuppets.worldbreak.com/index.html

[rankmanugly]

27 views and no comments? surely you can tell me something?
tell me its crap!! at least ill have somewhere to work from!!

[Max Mediocre]

It's in .wma format, so nobody with a mac can listen to it...try converting to mp3 or something less proprietary. You might not get more comments, but then at least more people will be able to hear it. For example, I'd say something if I could open the file.

[rankmanugly]

oh ok. cheers mate.
i had no idea about that. ill change it now. maybe someone will be able yo listen.
thanks

[Max Mediocre]

i dig it, man. The verses seem really buoyant and really keep my interest. The chorus seems a little bit less flowing and more forced, I think it might be how abruptly the change happens. A slow build up might work better with this song. Overall it sounds really good - I don't know much about production but that sounds pretty good too.