critique my song please

[gullyjewelz]

Originally Posted by gullyjewelz

feedback requested . . . this is the first drop . . . how's it comin?

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/song...songID=2861152

song title: gully in the house (aka make em clap)

can i get some feedback on this song please!!

[bknot1]

I thought i left feedback on this one before...

anyhow..beat is catchy..your riding the beat real nice..(thats a + in my book), real nice vibe in the song...i give it two thumbs up..stay on your grind...

[gullyjewelz]

thanks
u prolly did -- lol --
i figured i would drop it in more than one spot to try n increase the amount of responsed i'd git'

[BEATMAKERS]

this ish is clean as hell haha i luvs it like that flute but i'm a fool for bass and flute. keep doing ya thang

[jugalo180]

this is good, i would love to here a nice hook with this instead of the sample. the adlibs on the second verse can be tightened up a little because the timing is a little off. i like the intro and the lyrical content.

[NickSpringfield]

Nice track here. I LOVE the beat... (I wonder why...) Good stuff here though, but I also think it'd sound better with an actual chorus rather than the sample.

-Springfield

www.soundclick.com/emochoirecords