Please Give Me Some Feedback On My Song

[14yearoldkid]

hey guys listen to this and tell me what u think song wise
i kno my singing needs help but im trying lol
thanks

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=403204

[Dani Pace]

The song isn't bad, you might try clearing up the vocals a little on your next one though. I'm not critisizing, I know distorted vocals are a part of your genre. I just mean a little less distortion will help the vocals cut through the mix more. By the way, you've got a pretty good voice, don't scream too much and mess up your vocal cords which can happen easily in your early teens.

[Blue Bear Sound]

2 things....

1) yikes.........

2) this post belongs in the MP3 clinic

[Blue Bear Sound]

Actually - I'll elaborate on the "yikes..."

The recording is very demo'ish (which is alright since you're in the song-writing phase), so you won't win any points for recording quality. You already know the voice needs a lot of work, but I think you have some real interesting guitar stuff happening, you just need to develop more and make it a bit more cohesive.

Keep doing what you're doing though - you'll progress steadily, I'm sure!

[14yearoldkid]

yeah guys thanks for listening to it i appreciate all of the comments that u guys have made ill keep on trying to record it better and improve my voice

[gullyjewelz]

well can i get some feedback as well . . . ?

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/song...songID=2861152

song title: gully in the house (aka make em clap)

[jerseyboy]

You already know the voice needs a lot of work, but I think you have some real interesting guitar stuff happening, you just need to develop more and make it a bit more cohesive.

Keep doing what you're doing though - you'll progress steadily, I'm sure![/QUOTE]


i agree with this but deffinately keep up the practice and you will get better

[jerseyboy]

Originally Posted by gullyjewelz

well can i get some feedback as well . . . ?

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/song...songID=2861152

song title: gully in the house (aka make em clap)

yo kid i'm feeling that!! nice production and very clear vocals.

[gullyjewelz]

thanks for the feedback . . . i hope that's a good thing . . .
"clear vocals"
n not code for something else . . . lol

[92_]

I don't know how serious you can take this, coming from someone who's completely blank on guitar, but I think your skills with the strings is impressive. Specially if you're only 14...The rest of the track, well everything has pretty much been said about that Not to bad of a voice though, just need to practice a bit more.

-Nito

[Pinachi]

14year old

I'm diggin,i love the guitars something different and the whole thing is a good idea,just lack of song quality thats all,but keep on going and you'll get better.You have a talent,just need a little help in recording.
BTW did you have a metronome going?If not i suggest one.

Good job bro!!

[14yearoldkid]

thanks for listening im actually 16 now lol i signed up two years ago. i forgot about a metronome i will definately use one next time thanks for listening

[the_philth]

If I were writing songs (let alone harmonizing vocals) at 16 I'd be a gazillionaire by now from writing for other people. I was too damn busy learning how to play “Revelation Mother Earth” not-for-note as opposed to composing.

Your song is actually not half bad! I hear a Staind influence (or at least that’s how I’d produce it). Of course the vocals are... well... out of tune with one another. I suggest practicing your ass off before you attempt to track. With all due respect, I totally admire your creativity alone; but your skills are still in early development.

Keep writing them songs though! Go out, get another girlfriend and have her catch you cheating on her with her mom’s older sister. Drama makes for some great music! your voice though!!!! I know you said to pay no mind to vocals but- aye yai yai!!!! Get another singer to record your parts if you wanna record now, otherwise start practicing them scales brother!

However, the music is pretty damn good.

Just my opinion!

[14yearoldkid]

hey man yeh thanks for ur comments and thanks for listening ill will work on my vocals alot

[wx3]

you've posted this song before.

[chessrock]

Right now, I wouldn't try harmonies until you learn a little more about music theory and what constitutes a chord.

Certain notes, when sung in unison, create a chord, like with a guitar or piano. You can't just throw any two random notes together and expect them to form a proper chord. The notes have to follow a given structure in order to make for a proper harmony, and each note has to be in tune.