"All Gone" - Opinions Needed

[JazzMang]

Hi Guys.

Check out this link


I've been working on this one slowly, but surely.
As of right now, the only vox in there are the ones from the chorus.

Unfortunately, I am in the process of acquiring new monitors and I had to mix this on a temporary set of bookshelf speakers. I can assume there are some low end issues that I will fix when I get the new monitors.

I would appreciate any comments/recommendations. Constructive criticism encouraged.

Song is called "All Gone Test"

Thanks again

[Dogman]

Very nice. Sounds good and clear to me. No real help here, just props for a nice sound.
Ed

[Garry Sharp]

Yes, agree with Dogman, except that as you anticipated the bass is not right - apart from being boomy its not defined.

[JazzMang]

I'm not trying to bump this thread excessively, but I would really appreciate some other comments/suggestions/praise/hatred/anything pertaining to any aspect of the song.

[Halion]

Sound good man

I would put a little more highs in the vocals, but that might be the streaming audio.

Bass needs more balls. The sound of the bass is decent but once the mix starts filling up it is no where to be found.

[deepwater]

Vocals seem muddy.

[JazzMang]

Thanks for the suggestions and comments so far guys, keep them coming.
Does anyone think that there are some pitch issues with the vocals?

[JazzMang]

Made a direct MP3 link... hoping to get more opinions.

http://www.lightningmp3.com/live/633...itors_play.mp3

Thanks!

[Supercreep]

Is that a guitar at the beginning? It sounds almost like an autoharp. Nice sound.

[JazzMang]

At the very beginning of the chorus, or the beginning of the song? Well, either way, thanks!

-JazzMang

[Supercreep]

Of the song. If it was an autoharp, I guess you'd remember.

Very nice open detailed sound at the beginning.

[JazzMang]

Thank you.
Your sig is awesome! I love that phone call.

Anyone else wanna say anything? All these thread views and so few posts... naughty non-posters!