Sabiths FIRST posted SONG!!

[Sabith]

well.... this is my friend singin and playin the song last kiss. Reviews and tips are WANTED!!! I know there isn't a lot to talk about but do your best =)

http://members.fortunecity.com/sabithmusic/lastkiss.mp3
that should be a direct link... if not
http://members.fortunecity.com/sabithmusic
and U can find it from there.......(itz hard not too)

Thx for your time,

Sabith

[Buck62]

I tried and tried... but it won't load up.

Sorry... You might wanna try to post it again.

[supper]

I don't think it is as bad as you think. You could use a pop stopper on the vocals and maybe try doubling the guitar or experimenting a little bit. Sounds good. Try something original next time.

peace

Supper