free form poetry

[thane1200]

I thought it would be nice to start a thread solely for free-style, on the spot rhymes, lyrics and/or poetry.

I'm no good, but I think it would be kewl to see other's creativity and expression.

That said I'll give it a try...

my life

in a bin made by TrashCo
once was aflame; bottle of Tabasco
now confused and tormented, trapped like Donnie Brasco

at last though
this stress will go
in the final hours before I blow
out of this world and down fo sho

I know

I know
where this road will go;
out of this world and down fo sho

on the happier side at least I know
I leave this world a fresh new glow

my son

[Jack Russell]

WHo is Donnie Brasco? The poem might not be meaningful if you don't know who that is. I don't.

[Jack Russell]

the "fo sho" part makes it sound like it might be a rap song.

[freefalling]

Originally Posted by Jack Russell

the "fo sho" part makes it sound like it might be a rap song.

That's just what I was thinking. I also don't know who Donnie Brasco is. O.o But other than those things mentioned I don't really see anything else. I think it's okay, I kind of like it.

[Garry Sharp]

This reminds me of something that's been in my head for years:

I'm a product of this plastic paradise
Anything I buy I never
Use it twice

I'm a trashcan junkie it's my only vice
Come join me in my plastic
Paradise

Polymer life is so fantastic
Molecules slide they're
So elastic

etc. etc. (sorry too drunk to remember the rest)