New Song, Please comment!

[Jimarick]

Hi,

I was asked to write a song for a medical conference in my medical school about the tsunami disaster. It is going to be accompanied with a video of pictures of the aftermath of the tsunami.

I would love to know what anyone thinks of the song, and how you think it could be improved/changed.

It is the first song that I have ever tried to record and master using my new hardware ("Studio Proj. B1" & "EmU 1820m" & "Cubase" & "An electro-acoustic Ibanez Talman TCM50VBS")

I only took up the guitar last easter, so sorry if the guitar work is a little shoddy at parts. I'd love to know how you think I could record differently to obtain a better sound if you think at parts that the guitar sounds wrong.

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http://uk.briefcase.yahoo.com/jms_ricketts
(click sign in on right hand side, and then login using:

username: jms_ricketts
Password: letmein

Then go into the folder called music, and download/stream the track.
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Thanks,

James

Ps. Also, if there is a more appropriate place for me to place the file could someone tell me, as yahoo briefcase was the only one I could think of.

[Layla Nahar]

Originally Posted by Jimarick

Ps. Also, if there is a more appropriate place for me to place the file could someone tell me, as yahoo briefcase was the only one I could think of.

I got a 'try back later' message. soundclick.com is really popular among indie artists for making your stuff available.

[Jimarick]

Thanks, I'm attempting to post it on there now!
James

[Jimarick]

OK, done.

Pls listen to the song at:
http://www.soundclick.com/util/strea...D=2047294&q=Hi

Thanks all!
James

[Jimarick]

The song has completely changed now. Reworked the chorus and the structure and rerecorded it. Access it through soundclick:

http://www.soundclick.com/util/Downl...cfm?ID=2047294

Pls comment with your opinions!

Thx James