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Need a critique...

I wrote this song for an antivirus website. Before I send it, I would like some opinions.

SoftSynths used are Absynth and D'Cota. Enjoy and let me know - good and bad, please!

VIRUS

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Sounds great to me. Loved the bass line.
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Sounds great.

Now that ou've gone to the trouble to do it, you should try to get more mileage out of it. Sell it to folks for use on answering hold systems and as library music for all sorts of uses.

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Sounds great.

Now that ou've gone to the trouble to do it, you should try to get more mileage out of it.

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