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please critique
©2004
Back To The Future_____________________________________ I’ve been seen with beauty queens like angels from above But what was seen was not my dream my first my only love Now I’ve had girls with pretty curls and I’ve had girls with none But all I’ve had while I’ve been bad is a love affair with one. It’s not my place to show my face, in certain parts of town I’ve been around I’ve covered ground, for that I am renowned If I could pick or finger click a place where I should be It’s in a place with my true love the one that still loves me Well I’ve sung songs with trophy blondes and courted intellect But all I’ve done is turn and run from the one love I respect I must admit these girls were fit and some say quite a catch I loved the chase of each new face when opposites attract. Now it must be the time to see, the error of my ways I’ve never known a love so true since in those early days I have this chance to re-enhance the only love of mine It’s plain to see we’re meant to be, together for all time We’ll find a place and pack a case, and start our lives afresh And not look back on times gone by, remembering the mess We’ll settle down in some new town and finish this affair And put together back in place, the perfect matching pair we’ll both grow old and when it’s cold we’ll keep each other warm we’ll hold each other every night, until the break of dawn The kids will grow and who will know we'd ever been apart It’s time to be what’s meant to be, and go back where my futures starts it’s time to be what’s meant to be and go back where my future starts it’s time to be what’s meant to be and go back to my futures heart |
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