Heres my first song I ever wrote - I Told you why

[metaphor805]

Hey everyone here's my verse of the song that me and my homies are writing, we still dont got a chorus, if you have any ideas please let me know, and we need a beat, like the instrumental from Jadakiss - why, this is a rap or hip-hop song so let me know, out of a score from 1-10, 10 being the highest thanks, this aint no lie either! oh and dime doesnt mean dime, more like a sack of we3d!!!

I state in my mind/ I could rhyme/ I could do this sh*t all the time/ These words are mine/ I cut in front of you cause I'm next in line/ These words are by me, myself, and I/ Gangstas throwing out signs/ They throwing away there life/ I'm smarter and still in my prime/ I'll get more girls than you and your gang will ever buy/ See I get as* for free, right after go buy// No not pu**y, a dime/ Lazy as f**k when high/ Compared to Half Baked's The Guy/ I inhale like a pro and blow it out the sky/ Got one dream, to play on the diamond with nine/ Gonna hit streets hard and why/ Cause I could do this sh*t, called rhyme/ you gotta make sense, there's my dime/ I just told you why/ why, why, and why/ I told you why/

There is my verse, I play that with a instrumental song and takes me 45 sec to say it all, let me know what ya think ok!!!

[Clark_Griswold]

well, uh, it rhymes.

[FBI Cybercrime2]

Just say no.