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Old 07-19-2004
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Cool A song I wrote....

"The Truck Song" written by Michael Wilson... 1)MY DOG DIED THE DAY MY WOMAN LEFT ME AND LORD I HAVEN'T SLEPT A WINK IN WEEKS AND YOU MAY THINK MY LIFE MUST TRULY SUCK BUT AT LEAST I STILL HAVE MY TRUCK CHORUS: IT'S JUST A TRUCK,IT'S JUST A TRUCK,IT'S JUST A TRUCK,IT'S JUST A TRUCK IT'S JUST A TRUCK,TRUCK,GOD I LOVE MY TRUCK AN' YOU CAN TAKE EV'RYTHING FROM ME BUT YOU CAN'T TAKE MY TRUCK.... 2)I GOT LAID OFF FROM WORK THE OTHER DAY AN' NOTHIN' REALLY SEEMS IS GOIN' MY WAY AN' YOU MAY THINK THAT I'M STUCK IN A RUTT BUT THANK GOD THAT I STILL HAVE MY TRUCK (GO TO CHORUS/GUITAR SOLO) 3)I SPENT ALL MY MONEY ON A BET AN' EVERYTHING I DO GETS ME FURTHER IN DEBT AN' IT MAY SEEM LIKE I AM OUT OF LUCK BUT I'LL JUST WAVE GOOD-BYE IN MY TRUCK (GO TO CHORUS) IT'S JUST A TRUCK>>> THE END Let me know what you think!!!!
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ah...

A disco lyric...

how renaissance of you

seriously though...
try typing it out like this...it makes it easier for us to read man....

MY DOG DIED
THE DAY MY WOMAN LEFT ME
AND LORD I HAVEN'T SLEPT A WINK IN WEEKS
AND YOU MAY THINK MY LIFE MUST TRULY SUCK
BUT AT LEAST I STILL HAVE MY TRUCK

CHORUS:
IT'S JUST A TRUCK,
IT'S JUST A TRUCK,
IT'S JUST A TRUCK,
IT'S JUST A TRUCK IT'S JUST A TRUCK,TRUCK,
GOD I LOVE MY TRUCK AN' YOU CAN TAKE EV'RYTHING FROM ME BUT YOU CAN'T TAKE MY TRUCK....

2)
I GOT LAID OFF FROM WORK THE OTHER DAY
AN' NOTHIN' REALLY SEEMS IS GOIN' MY WAY
AN' YOU MAY THINK THAT I'M STUCK IN A RUTT
BUT THANK GOD THAT I STILL HAVE MY TRUCK

CHORUS:
IT'S JUST A TRUCK, IT'S JUST A TRUCK,
IT'S JUST A TRUCK, IT'S JUST A TRUCK
IT'S JUST A TRUCK,TRUCK,
GOD I LOVE MY TRUCK AN' YOU CAN TAKE EV'RYTHING FROM ME
BUT YOU CAN'T TAKE MY TRUCK....

GUITAR SOLO
3)
I SPENT ALL MY MONEY ON A BET
AN' EVERYTHING I DO GETS ME FURTHER IN DEBT
AN' IT MAY SEEM LIKE I AM OUT OF LUCK
BUT I'LL JUST WAVE GOOD-BYE IN MY TRUCK
CHORUS:
IT'S JUST A TRUCK,
IT'S JUST A TRUCK,
IT'S JUST A TRUCK,
IT'S JUST A TRUCK IT'S JUST A TRUCK,TRUCK,
GOD I LOVE MY TRUCK AN' YOU CAN TAKE EV'RYTHING FROM ME BUT YOU CAN'T TAKE MY TRUCK....

IT'S JUST A TRUCK

You forgot to mention your sattelite dish man...and the rifle rack in the window of your truck....
it'll probably make a million in Nash Vegas man...best of luck with it
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I love country- if you play the song backwards you get all your shit back....
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You gotta love the ultimate country song. You talked about everything from the truck to the bitch but the one thing you forgot was the beer. The guy has to get tanked and then accidentally run over his dog with his beloved truck. Other than that good C&W song. I think it could go mainstream

Paul
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It's a bit too subtle for mainstream. Needs to be a bit clearer about how much he loves his truck, or the audience won't get it.
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