fighting with this mix

[Be Loveless]

I think its almost there this is a new version of an older tune of ours called fragile stars. I think its functional at best, let me know what you think. Remember this is on a tascam 488 so keep suggestions basic. There is not much more "carving out" that I can do at this point in time. Maybe some pan and level suggestions. thanks
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"fragile stars"

[Prizmaxic]

I thought that was a nice song, I had trouble making out the vocals thru the guitar, but it could of been my speakers. great songwriting though, very unique and interesting.

[Be Loveless]

Thanks for the compliment. Yeah I think that the vocals and the guitar might be fighting for the same seat. I'll have to find a way to seperate those two and keep the peace.

[adam_in_audio]

now that's what I call original!

the all around bass noises sound a little plasticky but on an artistic level I think it's where it needs to be. It's good to hear something new every once in a while!

Adam

[Be Loveless]

any ideas on how to unwrap that plastic?