Let Me Know What Yallll Think Iight?

[lil_stebo]

yo let me tell ya somethin,
i m white,
but my shit is tight,
rappin's what i m lovin.

like i said rappin,s what i m lovin,
my dreams yea i m chassin,
adversity's what i m facin,
u'll soon see me on b.e.t tv station.

man i m tha best freestyler,
100% original ghost writer,
think jin's da man guess what my flow is thighter,
compared 2 me all da rappers today r oldtimers.

man i m probly only 16,
but garantie my rhymes will stay clean,
at a young age already swimmin in green,
man my name's big in da city trust me i've been seen.
i've done more than most and i'm still a teen.

LIL_STEBO

[Refreshe]

Rap has been down hill since wu-tang forever was released.

[Anti-Hero665]

If you want really good intellectual hip-hop (not gay rap), check out The Roots. They play their own instruments and are excellent lyricists.

[boingoman]

I think it's the same song you posted a few days ago in a different thread, Iight?

[dirtythermos]

I read it outloud at what I thought was a good rap tempo, and it lasted about 35 seconds. From the little I know about rap music, they are talking most of the time and there are very few "musical" interludes. That means you need 4-5 times as many words as you've got now.

Also, it didn't strike me as very rhythmic. But, like I said, I don't know much about rap music.