3 friends, 2 guitars, 1 bass, how's this for a live mix?

[kylosius]

i was practicing a song with a few friends up here. theres 2 guitar and one really low electric bass. this was done live, sorry but i'm singing (i'd rather have off key bob dylan style then my friends "i wanna sound like the used" style). don't worry, i'm not as bad as william hung. this was my first time micing multiple guitars, vocals, and bass at the same time, and i was wondering what. since this was a first run through there are some timing and lyrical mis-pronunciations. let me know how this sounds. www.nowhereradio.com/emopunker/singles the song is called "Down in AC (atlantic city)". i wrote these lyrics in the way alot of south jersey people speak (i lived in south jersey until i was 15 BTW). this was kind of inspired by bob dylan, bruce springsteen, and shane macgowan.

equipment used
yamaha mt400 4 track (used as a mixer)
2 no name acoustics
1 dean bass
1 crate amp (on the bass)
sm 58 (guitar)
behringer xm8500 (guitar)
shure 575S (early 70's mic, used on vocals)
shure pg 48 (used on amp)
cool edit pro (used for recording)

[kylosius]

perhaps i need a more catchy title to draw peoples attention.