Two more beats added. Please help critique!

[pkmusic]

These are Christian R&B/Rap tracks. Please help me with critiques. Thanks!!

[pkmusic]

Sorry, here is the link:

http://www.nowhereradio.com/benami/singles

[stray411]

This isn't my style of music. I checked out all 3 tracks on your site. Everything is nice and clear. I don't agree with some of the sound choices, especially all the synths you use, but that's just personal preference.

"The Great Commission" is the best out of the 3 IMHO. Little light in the bass though. The delay on the vocals throws the flow off in places during the verses.

"Driving Me Crazy" sounds a lot like Usher "My Way", at least the bass and drum line. Did you copy the track? I like the synth patterns, but the sounds are bit on the cheesy side.

Emcee is tight. The singer is pretty tight too. Overall, some real nice work.

Stray

[pkmusic]

thanks stray for taking the time to critique my tracks. I appreciate it. You are about third person that has mentioned both the delay issue and the bass issue. I will fix that.

About "Driving Me Crazy". You are right. It does sound like it. I did not copy the track though. The bass and drum beat differ just a little from Usher's version. Do you think I should change it up more?

[stray411]

Originally posted by pkmusic
About "Driving Me Crazy". You are right. It does sound like it. I did not copy the track though. The bass and drum beat differ just a little from Usher's version. Do you think I should change it up more?

No, I just asked because they were so similar. But I don't think that's a bad thing at all, it doesn't detract anything from the song IMHO.

I've personally found myself recreating melodies/basslines/etc from popular songs a bunch of times. It just happens sometimes.

Let us know when you post the changes to "The Great Commission".

Stray