New Joint From YungPoke

[YungPoke]

I just finished this track, did a rush mixdown job on it and thought I'd post it for some feedback. Feel free to critique if you want, if not thats cool too! Holla!



http://www.soundclick.com/treblesomerecords

[Outlaws]

Hell ya! Now thats a beat. I am not too into the ... "thing" ... but if its for the opening and drops out to be replaced by vocals, then I think you got something.

NICE WORK.


I miss this kind of stuff.

Its smooth.



Say...you get to do all that on your Fostex? Mixing and burning?

[Outlaws]

Let me know when you get some more stuff done.





(and link right to the music page)

[PrettyChica]

it's kinda repetitive but i wouldn't mind rappin on it

[YungPoke]

yeah you get to mix and burn on the fostex...i got a lot more beats its just soundclick erased my old page cause i posted a song off of Jay-z's Black album before it had came out so I had to start my page over. Ill be adding some more beats soon. Just lazy right now. And Prettychica i havent added all the variations and stuff yet its just a rough draft. Just wanted to post to get some feedback. Thanks for the feed back yall, I really do appreciate it.

[iceberg]

Sounds good, I would turn up your snare or clap, I can barely hear it. I know its a rough mix, and I like it. You must be an old schooler like myself. Keep it up.

Tell me about your setup.

Sir Bergersworth

[BEATMAKERS]

i cant front poke its hot do the dam thang

[Dj17]

i really not my style, but it's good.

[chalin27]

I have to admit that this is too repetative for me needs some changes ups other than the kick. The arangement is decent though.

[YungPoke]

thanks for the reviews....that clap is low because thats how the clap is....believe it or not its turned all the way up...lol....and i know it needs more varitations i plan on doing that once i lay the rap down....first i got to get my mic and stuff but i do appreciate everybodies feedback.

[YungPoke]

iceberg as far as my setup goes my main 2 pieces of equiptment are the ASR-10 and MPC 2000xl. I record on a fostex vf-160. I might occasionaly use my table to sample something here and there but I mostly create originals.

[jskillz89]

nice job youngPoke

[u know us]

i agree with chalin27, the arrangement is good but it is too repetative. but keep at it

[YungPoke]

thanks jskillz and uknow us....uknow us i know its repetitive i havent finished all the sequences yet...i was just posting to get some feed back....but thanks for the tips i appreciate the time you took to listen and type feedback.

[Hi_D_Ho_Man]

Damn all the positive feedback. i wanna hear it, how bout a DL'able mp3

[Outlaws]

Originally posted by Hi_D_Ho_Man
Damn all the positive feedback. i wanna hear it, how bout a DL'able mp3

What program are your trying to stream with. You might want to check out something else or look for an updated version.