first time posting a song here

[Zeppelin456]

Hi, I've been lurking on these boards for quite some time now listening to various other people's music and I thought I'd throw my song out there for some advice. I'm only 16 years old and I play every instrument but (to me) this doesn't sound so bad all things considered:

Behringer MX1604A (which I actually like although people bash Behringer alot here), an SM 57 (Used everything but the overheads and kick in this song, a couple of Audix D-10's and a D-12 (which all really suck badly), and only ONE mic stand (which creates quite a masking tape dilemna). I ordered two of those Oktava MK012s but they haven't come yet so I recorded this song by myself with what I had.
All of this was recorded into Cool Edit Pro...I mix on the speakers which came with my computer which is really no fun.
Any advice would be greatly appreciated, be harsh! Thanks!

http://home.comcast.net/~ebs16/Untitled_6_mix_5.mp3

[TexRoadkill]

Not bad considering what you're working with. The low end is pretty rumbly. Bass is the hardest thing to mix right especially without adequate monitors. But keep at it and read up.