"Seasons" lyrics

[rguagenti]

I am in the final stages of completing this song for posting in the clinic. It's an acoustic ballad called Seasons. Nothing highbrow here, just an emotion expressed simply,

Please give these lyrics a whirl:

Seasons

Seasons pass away, without a word
Words flow silently by, without you
Drifting through my life, I'm aimless
Looking through the eyes of strife, I'm shameless

Can you stay
See me through another day


Heavy is the heart that binds us
Shotgun is the start behind us
Sifting through the sands, I'm dirty
Falls right through my hands, I'm surly

Can you stay
See me through another day

[stonepiano]

Originally posted by rguagenti

Sifting through the sands, I'm dirty
Falls right through my hands, I'm surly

Tough rhyme here. I would suggest you substitute for surly and probably dirty too.

[jayoneill]

Originally posted by rguagenti

Sifting through the sands, I'm dirty
Falls right through my hands, I'm surly

Can you stay
See me through another day

Here's an idea....

Sifting through the sands, I'm falling
Falls right through my hands, I'm calling

Can you stay
See me through another day


just a thought,
jay