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Old 11-03-2003
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Melodic Punk Collaboration Lyrics

I've written these lyrics and recorded a scratch vocal performance for another person's guitar, bass and drums.

You can see that thread on the MP3 Clinic.

I'm struggling with the outro lyrics, any help would be appreciated.
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VERSE 1 : 00:15
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I bought you that teddy bear,
rented movies for the children so we could sneak upstairs.

The yoga thing was really sweet,
'n I stopped drinking, and smoking, and sneaking tokes of weed.

Ya tol' me not ta say the word.
The one that started with an L, and ended with an e.

I thought that was cute ya see,
I didn't know that you were damaged, broken wretchedly.


CHORUS : 00:44
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Why won't cha talk ta me.
Won't even let me in ta see.
What it was that I said, that filled you full of dread,
Pretty eyes bugging out your pretty, pretty, pretty head.

I wrapped my hands around my heart.
Pulled as hard as I could and ripped it out n' yeah it hurt.
Did I rush to feel the love, Did I scare you with the words
I love, I love.


VERSE 2 : 01:13
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Are ya feeling better rid of me.
I'm watching from the stairs, yer watching TV.

Your head lies in his lap I see,
He's just a friend, yeah that's all, it's just a movie.

The lights are out I cannot see.
As if I could through the tears, through the window yeah it's me.

I think I kinda worshipped you.
But now that yer a whore, I can set you free.


CHORUS : 01:43
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Why won't cha talk ta me.
Won't even let me in ta see.
What it was that I said, that filled you full of dread.
Pretty eyes bugging out your pretty, pretty, pretty head.

I wrapped my hands around my heart,
pulled as hard as I could 'n ripped it out n' yeah it hurt.
Did I rush to feel the love ?
Did I scare you with the words, I love, I love ?


VERSE 3 : 02:14
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Oh well I love you ... don't that suck !
Well it's the truth ... do you think I'm messed up ?
I think I'm breaking ... into parts and pieces.
I'm a maniac ... I'm becoming very freaky !

OUTRO : 03:14
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Caught between the L and E,
she can't say the O and V.
She can't say it and she won't let me.

It's the word that Starts with L,
ends with E and hurts like hell,
She can't say it and she won't let me.

03:27
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