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    New Alt-Rock Song

    Feel free to critique and give opinions. If there is something the songs needs to change or improve, let me know. I did not use my autotuner on this for the vocals. I think the melody notes are mostly good, but you check it out and offer up your take. Thanks!
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    Alt-rock ballad under construction!

    Somebody said that my vocals in this version of my new song sound "off", although I used some autotune, and I have never gotten a great comment on it so far. I don't know what that person meant. Feel free to comment on the instrumentals, too, but the voice is the main concern now. Here's a...
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    Altrock ballad that I'm writing. Need feedback.

    I want to make this better yet. Is it good? What improvement does it need? Vocals? Somebody told me the drums weren't good, but they are the only part I did not write. Am I writing music to the drums incorrectly? I'm trying to figure out why the chorus part of this song(the part I'm...
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    I'm writing an alt rock ballad. need pointers, mates.

    I would just like feedback on everything, especially the vocal. Also, whatmshou!d I do about the drums. Nobody ever likes the drums in my songs, but they are the part I never do myself. WHAT am I doing wrong regarding the drums? Do I write to them wrong?
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    Trying to improve this alt rock song to the point of showing off -with my own talents

    Lemme know how this sounds regardless of mixing-- but offer adivce if you can on the mixing if you feel you can. I'm mostly concerned about the vocals, and I'm trying to finally put my 13 years of learning to sing to practical use . Plus, I wrote it all except for the drums. Actually, I...
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    Here's an alt-rock song that I'm currently writing. Are the vocals off-key?

    I'm primarily wondering if the vocals sound good. I've been working on it for about a month. I think the harmony may be a bit off-key, but if you think so, lemme know. The lyrics are mostly filler lyrics. The song is not done yet. But if there is anything e;se about the mix you would like...
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