Here's my mix. Tried with the vocals compression, but that wasn't working good for me, since I'm still learning with that. I decided to leave out the sax, and add a fade out to the end.
Yeah, I couldn't get much of a good sound out of it. At first, I was considering just leaving in the ending solo, but in my opinion, it made the song feel incomplete. That, and I didn't really want to bury the guitar in the mix, and no offense to your guitarist, I think some his playing was a...