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    Looking for feedback for instrumental soft rock compositions

    thank you! I actually turned off the plugin, its a stock Logic Pro X amp, without additional effects.
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    Looking for feedback for instrumental soft rock compositions

    Hi this is fast rock composition Any feedback is welcomed. Recorded using Deviser guitar, Logic Pro X with Focusrite Scarlett Solo.
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    how to make my song longer while still being interesting (DNB)

    2 my cents: 1. include a bridge part (which repeats only one, usually after 2nd chorus) 2. repeat the verse part with a guitar (sax, etc) solo
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    "Don't Dream It's Over" (Crowded House) Fingerstyle guitar cover

    Fantastic! I love the song too and this is wonderful arrangement!
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    Looking for feedback for instrumental soft rock compositions

    Thanks! I'll definitely consider reducing plugins on the guitar track
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    Looking for feedback for instrumental soft rock compositions

    Hi I all, looking for a feedback to two instrumental rock compositions, recorded on Deviser electric guitar, Mac, Creative USB sound card, Logic Pro and Garageband. I also made the image videos, using Pexels free video, in Final Cut Pro. rock ballad type Soft rock melody
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    Concept of video and song

    never mind :)
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    Please feedback on the song!

    Finally, I managed to record a demo, in the demo, only first verse and chorus are recorded. Thanks for great suggestions on earlier version of lyrics! I am no good at vocal, so I apologize beforehand for bad vocal :) Hey bro, why are you smiling? Hey bro, why're you keep laughing? In this...
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    Feedback on lyrics please!

    I am writing a mellow acoustic ballad, will put soon here the recorded version, but meanwhile, I would really appreciate some feedback regarding lyrics: Thanks beforehand! Verse hey bro, why you’re are smiling hey bro, why you’re so sad in this time of the changes brutal ages, cruel fate and...
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    New South African Indie Music Video - "Happiest In Water"

    i know its impossible to reshoot those nice dusk photos, but I was thinking something like a portable stove, candle or perhaps a lighting could give some great lighting effects like this: but anyway, its just a suggestion :)
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    My first video

    Inspired by kind comments of other members, I am putting my first video for your judgment. I live and work in Asia, so this is not English speaking video. And this is my first attempt either, so please be patient with my effort. The song is about spring, someone waiting for spring to come...
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    Music Video?

    I'd add too. You will need a lot of filming (shooting). So prepare your digital camera, even iPhone will be OK. The main thing is a concept of video. So write down a simple scenario. Even if it doesn't include performance by other artists, just performance of your son, still write down the...
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    Your feedback is welcome!

    Please, gove your feedback on this song about recurring memories of young love (please keep in mind that I am not a singer and not a native English speaker) Lyrics Temporary heroes turn back the clock again turn back the clock again and again, to find whats’ been lost on the way to...
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