Recent content by Schmidty797

Making a comment like this shows, immaturity and stupidity. Please spare us next time... Also throwing fucking,shit,etc in the sentence,dosent make you look any cooler. From the structure of your sentences, I can tell you haven't looked deeply into anything. So before you even try to lecture...

Nice, I enjoyed it.

It can be very bad, or good. Sometimes a good way to vent anger, or even wish them the best etc.

Same thing happened to me, in a way. I wrote a song, lyrics and insturmental. Then, a friend made me listen to Make It Witchu, and its about one chord away from being the same. I kept mine, not throwing it away.. I say keep it, you put work into it. It's rightfully yours and I don't think...

As far as the bass goes, I believe most keyboards have a bass guitar tone on them. I figure that would work, and it'd be easier for you. But im new to this as well.

The song I attempted to write, was about a girl. And like mike pointed out, I did use the word "you" over 13 times. I'll be working on that obviously a rewrite is needed, and Ill use the ideas listed here thank you.

13 times, I would have never noticed that. I'll work on that heh, thanks. The original post has been edited with the rewrite. Hopefully its better....

I've rewritten the song here: Verse 1: I wanna wake up and be there for you. Oh, the things we'd do. I miss those eyes. bluer than blue. Some don't seem to realize my feelings for you. Oh so charmingly appealing cant help the feeling. Chorus: I wanna be there[repeat this line x2] get back...

Hmph, I completely agree. An odd way to overcome writers block. But everyone does it differently right ?

Thanks to you to gecko, some great advice.

Thanks for the advice, anything is better than nothing. I've tried that, and it did help.

I'm having an extremely hard time with a song I'm trying to write. I know what I feel, but I simply can't express it in words, I'm having writers block here. Thinking just isnt cutting it out this time around. I'd like to here what you guys do, if you've ever been in this situation. Also...

Hello, I've got a question. I'm just starting with mixing/recording and I'd like to know of some good midi cards that aren't ridiculously over priced heh. As far as instruments go and mixing programs, I'm good to go in that area. I am however looking for a new keyboard, I don't know if my...