Recent content by qwincy

Sorry, you'll need better ears than mine (and there are many of those here) to find any suggestions for improvement. Sounds awesome to me, seriously.

I like it a lot. Vocal definitely needs a boost.

Clever song, great lyrics. Also, I think the harmonies you have in here now are fine. They evoke early Bowie. Good luck with whatever is dogging you. But in the meantime (if you're anything like me), music helps so hopefully you'll stick around even if ya can't post stuff . :) :)

Sounds good. Nice guitar work. Can I ask what you are using?

Honestly, the piano doesn't sound bad to me at all. If anything I guess the note attacks are a little too similar... If you can increase the sensitivity of the keys, it might help. Do you have weighted-action keys?

Sounds great, very ready for prime time.

Real nice on all counts. I would agree that there are spots where the lead vocal would benefit from some compression.

http://www.nowhereradio.com But technically you're not supposed to upload covers.

The vocals are clear and upfront here and you did a nice job delivering them. They definitely need a little more high-end EQ, but you're moving in the right direction and there is more right with them than is wrong. Are you using an Octaver effect on your guitar instead of a bass? I hear like...

Sorry to re-hash what has already been said. This reminds of the short, atmospheric first track that some albums start with. Recent example: the new Brand New album. It's good by itself, would be better with some development, and probably best if used in the aforementioned context.

I don't get a link to the song, just your bio.

EddieRay, no. lol Unless Im really misreading him :D Beautiful guitar work; love those leads. The lyrics sound a little stilted in parts of the verses, as though you haven't quite decided how you want to vocally phrase them yet. And there is a touch of sibilance that seems to get better...

Spooky. I'm sure the cat got over it quicker than she did.

A bourbon chaser? I listened to this last night and a second time tonight and I've got nothing constructive for you, sorry. It just sounds great.

OK this is a really good song and both the guitar and vocal performances are very good also. Forgive my bluntness: the sibilance is a real problem for me. It is frequent and it is a harsh sibilance that borders on distortion, as opposed to just a little lispyness. I am the furthest thing from...