Thanks for taking the time to listen - I don't really get much opertunity to receive feedback. I think that if I grabbed a pick, and scraped it up and down my low E string the Mrs would just say "Yeah, that sounds lovely." Bless her
I think that I may work on it a bit more if I find the time - which I really should try and make time. I would like to add 'something' in the second verse - something in the background - mainly to stop people turning off due to boredom, as it's hardly the at the forefront of musical theoretical genius.
I definitely do need to do something with the lead guitar. I wanted to go for a 'dirty-blues' sound, but I think that I got a bit carried away. I think that I should try it clean, and then just add a bit of dirt.
Anways, it's a good learning experience, and getting some feedback is always very welcome!