The fact that you are asking for feedback tells me something about you:
1) You don't believe in your work because you didn't put your heart into it.
or
2) You are just trolling for hits on your web page.
Either one is enough for me to pass on it.
Isn't the purpose of this forum to get feedback?
"Hits to my web page"?? LOL! Yea, all 23! Thanks guys, I've MADE IT TO THE BIG TIME!
YOU'RE the troll. Bounce.