Comments welcome

[Mfusion]

icst.mp3Here's an original song

[Phrasemaker]

Here's an original response. Nice, a bit sterile for my own personal taste and I kind of expected the Lion king or shrek to leap out the media player, but on a composition level, it gets a touch yawny after a while and might benefit from some change ups in respect of the arrangement. I like some of the chord intervals, but some of it is a touch cliché but I guess we are all influenced by things we hear. You have a pleasant tone to your vocal, a bit noticeably over processed in places and gives the impression of too much air in proportion to the note sung, but that's most likely the compression and treatment combination.

Thanks

Tim

[engteck1987]

It's really not too bad for this attempt Keep your passion going and burning man!

[dalecurtis]

good one!!