Any criticism on my structure?

[Phrasemaker]

mmmm I don't think my original post is being read to the extent that what it actually says is being understood in respect of the vocal, I didn't indicate any dislike of the diction or any aspect of the vocal performance. I did find it could sit better in the mix and receive a better treatment to get the most out of it. If anyone can see in my original post where I said otherwise I'd be real interested in seeing where I actually criticise the vocal performance :-) it's the existing diction I want to hear better lol not a watering down of it. Language eh?

all the best

Tim

[RJMJ87]

@ Phrasemaker: I wasn't responding to your post, but to the original poster's response to yours : "A lot of fancy words there lol

So you think people could see the structure of the song more clearly if I pronounced words better?"

[WhiteStrat]

Why the hell else would we hang out here, if we didn't enjoy helping others?

For the free snacks?