Please, gove your feedback on this song about recurring memories of young love (please keep in mind that I am not a singer and not a native English speaker)
Lyrics
Temporary heroes
turn back the clock again
turn back the clock again and again,
to find whats’ been lost on the way
to paradise and hell,
what you and I had felt and said,
and what we loved and dreamed of
what made us cry and laugh,
and fall in gloom and love
Subverse
The clock has stopped and the time returned
But charm had gone and memories seem lost
But deep in heart they still remain
And come back again and again
Chorus
temporary heroes went away
temporary dreams faded grey
but your love comes back to me sweet again
to remind past pain in a blissful vain but only in dreams only in dreams
Verse 2
It all returns in dreams
good deeds, forgotten sins,
I found whats’ been lost on the way
to paradise and hell,
what you and I have felt and said,
and what we loved and dreamed of
what made us cry and laugh,
and fall in gloom and love,
From what I felt and what I saw
The charm has gone but memories don't go
And deep in heart they still remain
And come back again and again
Chorus
Bridge
And I am happy
cause the dream looks so real
But I wonder
If the love itself was real...still..
Chorus
https://soundcloud.com/jade-stone-6/temporary-heroes
Sorry, can't manage to embed it from soundcloud. Any feedback and critisism is welcome. I am not a singer so the singing is awful, of course, but I'd appreciate more on lyrics and melody. Also, the lyrics slightly differ from the recording (I will change the recording later).
Lyrics
Temporary heroes
turn back the clock again
turn back the clock again and again,
to find whats’ been lost on the way
to paradise and hell,
what you and I had felt and said,
and what we loved and dreamed of
what made us cry and laugh,
and fall in gloom and love
Subverse
The clock has stopped and the time returned
But charm had gone and memories seem lost
But deep in heart they still remain
And come back again and again
Chorus
temporary heroes went away
temporary dreams faded grey
but your love comes back to me sweet again
to remind past pain in a blissful vain but only in dreams only in dreams
Verse 2
It all returns in dreams
good deeds, forgotten sins,
I found whats’ been lost on the way
to paradise and hell,
what you and I have felt and said,
and what we loved and dreamed of
what made us cry and laugh,
and fall in gloom and love,
From what I felt and what I saw
The charm has gone but memories don't go
And deep in heart they still remain
And come back again and again
Chorus
Bridge
And I am happy
cause the dream looks so real
But I wonder
If the love itself was real...still..
Chorus
https://soundcloud.com/jade-stone-6/temporary-heroes
Sorry, can't manage to embed it from soundcloud. Any feedback and critisism is welcome. I am not a singer so the singing is awful, of course, but I'd appreciate more on lyrics and melody. Also, the lyrics slightly differ from the recording (I will change the recording later).