You Can Change The World

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My January song is "You Can Change The World". First song of 2018

You Can Change The World
You Can Change The World by Terry Carroll | ReverbNation



His accidency - they call you
And your trial has just begun
It's a long, long way till the end of time
And some will judge you just for fun
You have your reasons - your convictions
Though they may not be the same
As those who want and fight for your eviction
It's all just part of the power game

You can take the power
And make things right
You can change the world
You can take the power
And fortify the fight
You can change the world

The enormity- can break you
It can kill the strongest man
It has as you have seen and will again
And some have wondered why they ran
In times of trouble and confusing
They will walk right from the blame
You lose the truth in their lies and illusions
It's all just part of the money game.

No ones ever gonna reach the top
Just do the best you can and never stop
 
I really like your vocal in the chorus - the doubling. Also, the slide up on the first "You can change the world".

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Like it a lot.
Begins very Dylan-esq (Bob not Dylan Thomas).
Then gets a bit Beatle-y. WELL DONE.
You've got a really good voice, great beat.
Suggestion: attenuate the drums back about 10% they jump out in front of you.
I like this song a lot!
Thank you kindly,
Claude
 
Very nice work. The simplicity of the instruments really opens up room for the vocals. In my opinion, I would alter the drum velocity notes, as it sounds too processed (Like how it suddenly changes hats at 2:16). They also need to be lowered in volume, as CamCoding suggested.
The lyrics are integrated very well in the song, so props!
 
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