Song - Moon Dust - is this a mess compositionally?

[Alphaflux]

https://soundcloud.com/alpha-flux/moon-dust
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Hi guys, this sort of fell out of me yesterday night and I like it but i'm really not sure if it's interesting or just too bizarre. I wanted it to evolve but i'm not sure if it translates very well at the moment.

I would love to know what you guys think and if you have any ideas to help make it flow better.
I kinda see the first part as an intro then it goes all kinds of weird

(p.s - posting here instead of MP3 mixing feedback as i am overall happy with the mix so far, just the composition i'm not too sure on)

 

[Robus]

I commented over on the Clinic. It's potentially a strong composition that looses the plot toward the end. One too many breakdown I think.