Please feedback on the song!

StoneJack

Member
Finally, I managed to record a demo, in the demo, only first verse and chorus are recorded.
Thanks for great suggestions on earlier version of lyrics! I am no good at vocal, so I apologize beforehand for bad vocal :)

Hey bro, why are you smiling?
Hey bro, why're you keep laughing?
In this time of dark changes
Brutal ages,
Cruel fate
blindfolded hate

Hey bro, why are you crying?
Hey bro, why're you so sad?
In this time of fast changes
Phoney angels,
Lonely days
And loveless nights

Chorus
Fate has crossed our path
Fate has taken you from us
Fate’s got no tears, no regrets,
And it is us who keep losing friends,
and it aint
many left
till the end
my bro


Hey bro, why’re you smiling?
Hey bro, you're always stay young
In this time of dark changes
Ruthless ages,
Blind fate
And a failed state

Chorus
Fate has crossed our path
Fate has taken you from us
Fate’s got no tears, no regrets,
And it is us who keep losing friends,
and it aint
many left
till the end
my bro


Bridge
time has stopped for you
fate has chosen you
You’ll always be with us
Until the end of times


 
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