davidnyc64
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Hey forum,
I recently wrote this song and I'd like to get some feedback.
Thanks,
David
"God only knows"
This city life, these city streets
The strong survive and the weak man weeps
Can we overcome the faults that we claim
Can we right our wrongs, or will things stay the same?
Can we change the world? Can we change our ways?
Can we lead ourselves the way to better days?
God only knows...…repeat
I see an old man / Sleeping on the street
He's got his old dog there sleeping by his feet
He holds a paper cup in his sleeping hand
What will become of this homeless man
Where has he been? what has he seen?
Can he fix his broken life and broken dreams?
God only knows...…..repeat
A teenage mother raising a son on her own
Her boyfriend walked out leaving them both all alone
Not much she can say, there's not much she can do
Can she raise this boy right? can she see things through?
She's grown up too fast and lived beyond her years
Will she find the strength within, despite her frightened tears?
God only knows...…repeat
An addicted man shoots the devil into his veins
An abandoned house where he frees himself from his pain
His family cries and tries to guide him back home
But his heroin mind rejects the love they have shown
Will he fade away into the darkness of his soul?
Will he fight his way back to his loving home?
God only knows...…repeat
God only knows…..end
I recently wrote this song and I'd like to get some feedback.
Thanks,
David
"God only knows"
This city life, these city streets
The strong survive and the weak man weeps
Can we overcome the faults that we claim
Can we right our wrongs, or will things stay the same?
Can we change the world? Can we change our ways?
Can we lead ourselves the way to better days?
God only knows...…repeat
I see an old man / Sleeping on the street
He's got his old dog there sleeping by his feet
He holds a paper cup in his sleeping hand
What will become of this homeless man
Where has he been? what has he seen?
Can he fix his broken life and broken dreams?
God only knows...…..repeat
A teenage mother raising a son on her own
Her boyfriend walked out leaving them both all alone
Not much she can say, there's not much she can do
Can she raise this boy right? can she see things through?
She's grown up too fast and lived beyond her years
Will she find the strength within, despite her frightened tears?
God only knows...…repeat
An addicted man shoots the devil into his veins
An abandoned house where he frees himself from his pain
His family cries and tries to guide him back home
But his heroin mind rejects the love they have shown
Will he fade away into the darkness of his soul?
Will he fight his way back to his loving home?
God only knows...…repeat
God only knows…..end