famous beagle
Well-known member
This is a new song idea, but I'm not exactly sure where I should go from here. I'm wondering if this is a song that should have a proper chorus or not. Normally when writing a song, I'll get a verse idea and a chorus idea pretty much in the first sitting. But on this song, a chorus hasn't hit me yet. I do, however, have one more verse written since I recorded this idea.
Anyway, I was just wondering what other people think. Do you hear it with a chorus, or maybe just a song with many verses and maybe some musical interludes at times? Any other ideas?
Thanks!
https://www.dropbox.com/sh/uaup98o10hayb8v/AABJ7wPTQDQec100Z1Vlo6cia?dl=0
Lyrics:
You came alive inside my head
Didn't have a dime to dial out
So you looked around the town
For some place to lie down
You picked up all the broken glass
So you won't forget when you awake
You may be living in a dream
But you'll make no mistake
So the rabbit doesn't move at all
Until he has to cut and run
And the chase is over
Before it's even begun
But the dog he won't give up
His memory has wiped the slate clean
Doesn't know better not to try
For what seems well within his reach
Anyway, I was just wondering what other people think. Do you hear it with a chorus, or maybe just a song with many verses and maybe some musical interludes at times? Any other ideas?
Thanks!
https://www.dropbox.com/sh/uaup98o10hayb8v/AABJ7wPTQDQec100Z1Vlo6cia?dl=0
Lyrics:
You came alive inside my head
Didn't have a dime to dial out
So you looked around the town
For some place to lie down
You picked up all the broken glass
So you won't forget when you awake
You may be living in a dream
But you'll make no mistake
So the rabbit doesn't move at all
Until he has to cut and run
And the chase is over
Before it's even begun
But the dog he won't give up
His memory has wiped the slate clean
Doesn't know better not to try
For what seems well within his reach