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    Quote Originally Posted by musicturtle View Post
    Einar,
    Here is what I have come up with. I am not extremely happy with the vocal recording but I am hoping to get a new mic and redo the vocal.
    Hope you like it.



    Hi.

    Nice. I hear that u have changed some of the lyrics.... suits the song.

    A couple of things that u might take into consideration to next recording:

    - There seems to be some small drifting off beat. Maybe try to sing it with the metronome on..? Helps me when im singing to a somewhat undefined beat music.
    - take back the pitch shift u used on the first recording in "and a crowded people just fade away" in the word "away" u did a pitch change I loved
    -same goes with "and something new about every day". the pitch in "day" as u did on the first recording. Thats what caught my attention...

    Just some suggestion, the decision is completely yours :-)

    -einar-

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    Good idea for the click track. Didn't really think of that since I didn't record the music. I will give it a go next time. I will see if I still have the recording of my first take so I can see what you are talking about pitch wise. Either way I have really enjoyed working on the song.

    Tony
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    Quote Originally Posted by seeking View Post
    Hi.

    Nice. I hear that u have changed some of the lyrics.... suits the song.

    A couple of things that u might take into consideration to next recording:

    - There seems to be some small drifting off beat. Maybe try to sing it with the metronome on..? Helps me when im singing to a somewhat undefined beat music.
    - take back the pitch shift u used on the first recording in "and a crowded people just fade away" in the word "away" u did a pitch change I loved
    -same goes with "and something new about every day". the pitch in "day" as u did on the first recording. Thats what caught my attention...

    Just some suggestion, the decision is completely yours :-)

    -einar-
    Here is my final(for now ). Thanks for sharing your music and letting me work with it.

    Tony

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    Quote Originally Posted by musicturtle View Post
    Here is my final(for now ). Thanks for sharing your music and letting me work with it.

    Tony


    Nice. You have the right voice for this song.

    -einar-

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