Love

[Irwin abrigo]

This is a piano melody of this song I've compose, your criticisms I will not be taken personally I will only see it as a person wanting to help. Do you think that after listening to this (the way it is) A singer can sing this song?


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LOVE
©2016 Irwin Abrigo

(1st Verse)
Sometimes
I realize
Like a miracle
I’m cured inside

That’s how
I’m feeling
Right now

Some people
Never fell in love
Yet they look you
In the face and say

This world
Is a crazy place
That’s what they say

They can feel
Nor understand
What is love

They would know
Nor understand
What I’m talking about
It is love

(Chrous)
I’m
Not the guy
Who will lay down
And die
I’m willing
To fight
To survive
And
If love
Don’t work out right
The first time
I will
Give love
A second
Try

(2nd Verse)
They say
Love breaks your heart
So I’d stayed away
Without a doubt

Wanted
To find a way out
Met someone
And I fell in love

To those people
I would like to say
This world
Is a happy place

That’s what I’ll say
I can feel
And understand
What is love

I know
And I understand
What it’s all about
It is love

(Chorus)
I’m
Not the guy
Who will lay down
And die
I’m willing
To fight
To survive
And
If love
Don’t work out right
The first time
I will
Give love
A second
Try

(Bridge)
So whenever
you fall in love
Look those people
face to face and say
This world
is a happy place
That you can say

You will feel
And understand
What is love

You will know
And understand
What I’m talking about
It is love

(Chorus)
I’m
Not the guy
Who will lay down
And die
I’m willing
To fight
To survive
And
If love
Don’t work out right
The first time
I will
Give love
A second
Try

It is love
It is love
It is love
Love, love ,love

 

[cashpapa]

As a starters,the title is ok.The good thing about it is that you can expect the theme of the song easily.However,if you want to attract the reader,it all starts with picking a great title.For example,adding adjectives to the word love,or changing the title to Romance.As for the idea,there is a focus on "the people" which doesn't add an effect.This is why you should change the bridge.Overall,it is a good write.Good luck with it.